Thursday, 16 August 2012

Is this any better?

I'm taking a few days off while Donna reads Hoodies Two. Even then I'm going to go over it again. 

   Before releasing that, I'm going to repair my sloppy mistakes in Kongomato. It was stupid of me to release it so early.

   In the meantime, I've sketched out a possibly new cover for Hoodies Two. It isn't finished yet, but does anyone think it's better than the original?

 That's the original.

This is the new one I've been working on.


  1. Now - this is probably not going to help you much. I prefer your new one - I like the way it fills the page. Out of curiosity I asked my 14 year old son what he thought - he said definitely the old one (he could relate more to the spaceship in that one.) So I showed them to my husband and like me he chose the new one. Must be a generation thing!

  2. It's kind of you to comment. I also changed the first one. Now the spaceship is bristling with missiles and I don't know which to use. I'll probably do a bit more to the new one then make up my mind.

  3. I like the 1st one, but the 2nd one is intriguing. I love Three Hoodies 2, btw.

  4. Thank you. I've slightly changed the first one as well and now I'm just confused - same as always.