Donna, my wonderful proof reader, began Three Hoodies Two the other day. Fortunately, or unfortunately, depending on how you look upon it, she found about six errors in the first chapter. She also highlighted a problem I'd been trying to avoid.
You know what GB Shaw said about England and America: "Two countries separated by a common language."
I've now asked Donna to trash her copy of H/2, and I've started again. Hopefully it won't take more than a few days.
Still can't decide on a cover. I think I'll start all over again.